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 Posted on Jun 3rd
View adult dating member profile hererobomuff
age 45

It has been altered, although still no smiling pictures. The tone is a lot better, but a bit of tidying up of the grammar and punctuation wouldn't go amiss, plus a bit more about yourself as already suggested.

I think the fact that you actually ask and listen is admirable, this is not a particularly common male trait, so once your profile is up to spec you'll do fine I'm sure.

 
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 Posted on Jun 3rd
View adult dating member profile hereno-nix-hannah
age 44
Kent

I don't know whether you've altered your profile, but it tells me absolutely nothing about you, other than your name. It helps that someone has something to chat about and without you even hinting at what you like to do, quite frankly it's a non-starter.

It looks as if what's there has just been thrown on with no thought of the content. The initial impression is "if he can't be bothered to consider what he's written, I wonder if that's what he's really like?"

 
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 Posted on May 30th
View adult dating member profile herekohwebby
age 54
Erith

well thank you very much for taking the time to reply will take that on board ,cheers

 
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 Posted on May 30th
View adult dating member profile hererobomuff
age 45

You sound a bit pushy, like you just want to get it 'out the way' with absolutely anyone, like it's the wahing up or something. Try rewording it so you describe what you'd like, but without the ticking clock in the background, so to speak.

Couple of pictures of you smiling and not in a pub wouldn't hurt either

 
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 Posted on May 28th
View adult dating member profile herekohwebby
age 54
Erith

been using the site for some time,and not having much luck what so ever.is my profile ok is it me,anyone got any tips

 
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